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blog post 11

When it comes to school whether if its middle school, Highschool, or college the number 1 thing everyone wants to do is make it out successfully. So why do many many college students 67%, in fact, fail to do so? Some reasons college students fail to graduate is they may not know what direction they are taking in life or they don’t know what their strong suit is. Other reasons may be obvious like cost or just not fitting in, or failing classes some don’t even go to class. In my opinion, college isn’t for everybody to buy everybody can make college for them if they are determined enough, but then again there are other routes people can take in life. Other questions that may be worth asking is when students go into college are they prepared for the task ahead of them? more often than not the answer is no. Students are unprepared for college or shall I say the work they have to do.  procrastination is something many students even myself fall victim to. When it comes to doing other stuf...

making claim revision

1. context of research; college 2 . general topic ; students in college 3. specific topic; less than 1/3 of college students graduate 4. Analytical research question; what causes this amount of students to not graduate? 5. Specific claim . multiple reasons , money, family being overwhelmed, changing of mindset 6. research. websites. articles about college 7. Include your 3 main focal points 1.benefits of staying in college                                                           2.effects college has on students                                                           3.pros and cons of dropping out of college.

making your claim

1. context of the research argument; south America 2.  general topic; deforestation 3. specific topic; deforestation in s America 4. Analytical research question; what effect does deforestation have on humans and animals. 5. Specific Claim or hypothesis; the benefits of deforestation for humans are more homes, farmland, and croplands. The way it affects animals is no homes and some often die out. 6. Research; websites and books about deforestation, environmental science, ecosystem, etc. 7. Include your 3 controlling ideas or focal points; 1. benefits of deforestation for humans                                                                                   2.effects on animals                         ...

blog post 10

Jerrel Charles Dr.Harris English 1101 11 march 2020                                                                Summary   "The Earth's lungs are wheezing." Washington Post , 4 Jan. 2019. Gale In Context: Opposing Viewpoints , https://link.gale.com/apps/doc/A568345353/OVIC?u=ggcl&sid=OVIC&xid=9f3880a1. Accessed 11 Mar. 2020. “The Earth's lungs are wheezing “is a short article talking about the tropical forest being destroyed. The first sentence talks about how Donald Trump has been destroying America’s forest. It then moves on to brazils president Jair Bolsanro who has been called brazils Donald trump for destroying the tropical rainforests and letting out mor...

Music

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When it comes to music it is one of the most popular genres in the world n will continue to be as long as humans exist. In the video “stand by me” is a video that conveys the message of you needing somebody my you no matter what. The video consists of the W.O.V.E.N elements like the W for instance, which is written the way they used written was every musician they put where they were performing and what their name was. The O which is oral is the most obvious part that symbolizes the singing in the video. The background and different places in the video us the visual part. Plenty of equipment was used in the making of the video and then it was put on youtube that represents the electronic part of woven. The people dancing and making facial expressions equals to the nonverbal part of the element. The video was very heartwarming and easy to watch with the music and the different cultures that we see in the video. The is showing how music brings people together, as you can see people ...

blog post #7

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The human skeleton is very special to us because we need it to do everything. The youtube video “ does the human body really replace itself every 7 years?” is very straight forward and debunks the theory of our bodies replacing themselves every 7 years. The video explains that its 7-15 years. The video is also very visual and uses pictures of the brain and the skeleton to help the viewer illustrate what they are talking about. The youtube video was very short and informational providing information about the skeleton-like how it sheds or telling the viewers about the brain and history on how they get all the information. Overall the video was simple, visual straight to the point. It was also oral because it had a woman talking about all the information in the video. The video was also a little bit goofy so it can keep the viewer engaged with the woman talking saying some jokes. The second video which was called “ do babies really have more bones than adults” is a short and infor...

Blog post 6

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Valentine's day is a day you can celebrate not only with your significant other but with your family, that's why the article that most appealed the history of valentines day isn’t that romantic ” by Taysha Murtaugh and Rebekah Lowin. The article starts off by backing up my claim in saying “Valentine's Day means different things to different people “.The first sentence in the article I can relate to because Valentine's day hasn’t ever really meant anything to me its really just been another day in the year. I do like seeing others celebrate and be happy, the article also talks about the history good and bad for instance it talked about men beating women with whips “ a ritual of naked men beating women with whips “ is not something you want to hear when it comes to valentines day.  On the other hand, it talked about other traditions in different countries which I liked, they stated that February 14th is the first day of spring in great Britain.Other articles like “ the ...