making claim revision

1. context of research; college
2 . general topic ; students in college
3. specific topic; less than 1/3 of college students graduate
4. Analytical research question; what causes this amount of students to not graduate?
5. Specific claim . multiple reasons , money, family being overwhelmed, changing of mindset
6. research. websites. articles about college
7. Include your 3 main focal points 1.benefits of staying in college
                                                          2.effects college has on students
                                                          3.pros and cons of dropping out of college.

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